(One Piece) Initiation
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salmon_pinkTitle: Initiation
Fandom: One Piece
Pairing: Luffy/Zoro/Sanji
Rating: NC-17
Words: 825
Notes: Threesome. For![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
lilirum's request at ![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-community.gif)
sanji_is_a_slut.
Summary: They have to be fair, after all.
It was like they were speaking in some sort of complex code that only idiots could understand.
“Do I have to?” Zoro grumbled, sounding more petulant than a disgruntled little girl being forced to eat her vegetables. Only more gruff and not the slightest bit cute.
For a moment Luffy almost looked angry, and Sanji hadn’t been with the crew long but he already recognised the sight as one of the most disturbing spectacles that side of the Grand Line.
“Of course you do!” Luffy bellowed, leaping to his feet.
“Why?” Zoro growled, one fist pounding against the table as he also lurched to standing. “Didn‘t we do that just the other week?”
“That was Usopp’s turn!” Luffy shouted, stamping forwards. “It wouldn’t be fair if we didn’t do it for every new nakama!”
“It wasn’t like that when I joined,” Zoro snapped back, one hand closing over Wadou’s hilt.
“Because I was the only one,” Luffy retorted, leaning forwards until they were almost nose to nose. “But I more than made up for it, didn’t I?”
Sanji blinked and watched as the simmering tension in the air wavered for a moment as both Luffy and Zoro grinned slightly to themselves, eyes glazing over.
Zoro was the first to catch himself, shaking his head slightly before frowning again. “But why?”
“It’s tradition,” Luffy explained with no patience. “We did it for Nami, too.”
“That doesn’t count,” Zoro glowered. “Damn woman ended up taking over the whole thing.”
“Still happened though!” Luffy cried, temper flaring again. “It’s tradition!”
“Urgh, fine!” Zoro barked, throwing his hands up.
“Good!” Luffy shouted back, legs stretching enough to give him the extra few inches to tower over his First Mate.
Sanji wasn’t sure what was happening, but his instincts were being quite loud in insisting that he’d be safer overboard. “Uh, this isn’t about the last spring roll anymore, is it?” he asked quietly.
Two sets of eyes turned to him, glowing with demonic intensity.
*
On the Going Merry’s deck, Nami and Usopp glanced up from their game of cards as an unholy sounding scream erupted from the galley.
“Can’t be helped,” Nami shrugged.
“It’s tradition,” Usopp agreed.
An almighty crash ripped through the air, followed by the sound of breaking china. Lots of breaking china.
“Go fish,” Nami said.
*
“I just don’t like him, is all,” Zoro muttered distractedly.
“You said that about Usopp, too. And Nami,” Luffy reminded him cheerfully.
“Yeah, well, Usopp grew on me,” Zoro admitted. “But I still don’t trust that witch.”
Luffy just laughed.
“But this one? He’s just, well, he’s just annoying,” Zoro sighed. “Pisses me off just to look at him.”
Sanji was torn between defending his own honour, or his precious Nami-san’s. Unfortunately, all he managed when he opened his mouth to yell was a rather desperate sounding whine.
“Oh, sorry Sanji,” Luffy said, grinning broadly enough to completely null and void any of his apology’s potential sincerity.
He heard Zoro chuckle slightly against his neck, and maybe he would have found the strength, or at least the voice, to protest that if Luffy hadn’t chosen that moment to shift closer between the legs Zoro was so artfully holding spread open. Sanji’s back was plastered against Zoro’s torso, slick press of heat and flesh, his own legs held pinned, Zoro’s hands gripping the backs of his knees and his thighs touching his own chest. Luffy leaned up, tongue searing against Sanji’s neck, and every shiver that racked his over-sensitised skin just caused Zoro shift teasingly inside of him.
“Where were we?” Luffy mused, sitting back on his heels and tapping his chin thoughtfully. “Oh, yeah.”
He heard Zoro curse and duck his head to the side just in time to avoid having his nose broken by the way Sanji’s head snapped backwards. Luffy’s tongue was back in an instant, on his neck, over his ear, dragging over the exposed flesh of his throat, as his hand wasted no time in the way it squeezed and rubbed his own cock against Sanji’s. Slippery, almost painfully hot, fitted together so perfectly, and Sanji gasped and whimpered and tried to buck his hips against it and only succeeded in impaling himself more fully on Zoro’s length.
“Make him do that again,” Zoro hissed.
Luffy grinned, sharp and focused, and his thumb flicked over the head of Sanji’s cock, hand tight around the base. Sanji’s hips jerked up involuntarily, and this time Zoro’s hips thrust up at the exact moment Sanji dropped back against him.
He could feel the two of them exchange a pointed look over his shoulder as he wailed.
*
Usopp stared thoughtfully at his cards. “Maybe we should get them to alter that tradition,” he suggested quietly, reaching to draw from the deck. “You know, so we can all join in.”
“Hmm, we’ll talk to them tonight,” Nami replied, before spreading her cards out in front of her. “Rummy.”
Fandom: One Piece
Pairing: Luffy/Zoro/Sanji
Rating: NC-17
Words: 825
Notes: Threesome. For
lilirum's request at sanji_is_a_slut.Summary: They have to be fair, after all.
It was like they were speaking in some sort of complex code that only idiots could understand.
“Do I have to?” Zoro grumbled, sounding more petulant than a disgruntled little girl being forced to eat her vegetables. Only more gruff and not the slightest bit cute.
For a moment Luffy almost looked angry, and Sanji hadn’t been with the crew long but he already recognised the sight as one of the most disturbing spectacles that side of the Grand Line.
“Of course you do!” Luffy bellowed, leaping to his feet.
“Why?” Zoro growled, one fist pounding against the table as he also lurched to standing. “Didn‘t we do that just the other week?”
“That was Usopp’s turn!” Luffy shouted, stamping forwards. “It wouldn’t be fair if we didn’t do it for every new nakama!”
“It wasn’t like that when I joined,” Zoro snapped back, one hand closing over Wadou’s hilt.
“Because I was the only one,” Luffy retorted, leaning forwards until they were almost nose to nose. “But I more than made up for it, didn’t I?”
Sanji blinked and watched as the simmering tension in the air wavered for a moment as both Luffy and Zoro grinned slightly to themselves, eyes glazing over.
Zoro was the first to catch himself, shaking his head slightly before frowning again. “But why?”
“It’s tradition,” Luffy explained with no patience. “We did it for Nami, too.”
“That doesn’t count,” Zoro glowered. “Damn woman ended up taking over the whole thing.”
“Still happened though!” Luffy cried, temper flaring again. “It’s tradition!”
“Urgh, fine!” Zoro barked, throwing his hands up.
“Good!” Luffy shouted back, legs stretching enough to give him the extra few inches to tower over his First Mate.
Sanji wasn’t sure what was happening, but his instincts were being quite loud in insisting that he’d be safer overboard. “Uh, this isn’t about the last spring roll anymore, is it?” he asked quietly.
Two sets of eyes turned to him, glowing with demonic intensity.
*
On the Going Merry’s deck, Nami and Usopp glanced up from their game of cards as an unholy sounding scream erupted from the galley.
“Can’t be helped,” Nami shrugged.
“It’s tradition,” Usopp agreed.
An almighty crash ripped through the air, followed by the sound of breaking china. Lots of breaking china.
“Go fish,” Nami said.
*
“I just don’t like him, is all,” Zoro muttered distractedly.
“You said that about Usopp, too. And Nami,” Luffy reminded him cheerfully.
“Yeah, well, Usopp grew on me,” Zoro admitted. “But I still don’t trust that witch.”
Luffy just laughed.
“But this one? He’s just, well, he’s just annoying,” Zoro sighed. “Pisses me off just to look at him.”
Sanji was torn between defending his own honour, or his precious Nami-san’s. Unfortunately, all he managed when he opened his mouth to yell was a rather desperate sounding whine.
“Oh, sorry Sanji,” Luffy said, grinning broadly enough to completely null and void any of his apology’s potential sincerity.
He heard Zoro chuckle slightly against his neck, and maybe he would have found the strength, or at least the voice, to protest that if Luffy hadn’t chosen that moment to shift closer between the legs Zoro was so artfully holding spread open. Sanji’s back was plastered against Zoro’s torso, slick press of heat and flesh, his own legs held pinned, Zoro’s hands gripping the backs of his knees and his thighs touching his own chest. Luffy leaned up, tongue searing against Sanji’s neck, and every shiver that racked his over-sensitised skin just caused Zoro shift teasingly inside of him.
“Where were we?” Luffy mused, sitting back on his heels and tapping his chin thoughtfully. “Oh, yeah.”
He heard Zoro curse and duck his head to the side just in time to avoid having his nose broken by the way Sanji’s head snapped backwards. Luffy’s tongue was back in an instant, on his neck, over his ear, dragging over the exposed flesh of his throat, as his hand wasted no time in the way it squeezed and rubbed his own cock against Sanji’s. Slippery, almost painfully hot, fitted together so perfectly, and Sanji gasped and whimpered and tried to buck his hips against it and only succeeded in impaling himself more fully on Zoro’s length.
“Make him do that again,” Zoro hissed.
Luffy grinned, sharp and focused, and his thumb flicked over the head of Sanji’s cock, hand tight around the base. Sanji’s hips jerked up involuntarily, and this time Zoro’s hips thrust up at the exact moment Sanji dropped back against him.
He could feel the two of them exchange a pointed look over his shoulder as he wailed.
*
Usopp stared thoughtfully at his cards. “Maybe we should get them to alter that tradition,” he suggested quietly, reaching to draw from the deck. “You know, so we can all join in.”
“Hmm, we’ll talk to them tonight,” Nami replied, before spreading her cards out in front of her. “Rummy.”
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Date: 19/06/2007 00:50 (UTC)“Make him do that again,” Zoro hissed.
::fans self::
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Date: 19/06/2007 21:41 (UTC)no subject
Date: 19/06/2007 02:52 (UTC)Nami and Usopp playing cards is SO FUNNY
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Date: 19/06/2007 21:42 (UTC)no subject
Date: 19/06/2007 03:13 (UTC)Wonderful stuff. Love love love it. ^_^
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Date: 19/06/2007 21:43 (UTC)no subject
Date: 19/06/2007 04:22 (UTC)The whole idea of the Mugiwara pirates secretly being a bunch of sex fiends amuses me more and more when I read these kinds of fics.
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Date: 19/06/2007 17:06 (UTC)no subject
Date: 20/06/2007 16:45 (UTC)and such a bizarre Sanji look-alike. ♥no subject
Date: 19/06/2007 21:44 (UTC)no subject
Date: 20/06/2007 16:43 (UTC)no subject
Date: 19/06/2007 05:29 (UTC)I wanna be in the middle of a Mugiwara pirate sandwich...
But... ugh! With the serious Luffy, sex-fiend Luffy, and the reluctant, but oh-so-enjoying-it Zoro... oh god, and the completely ignored and oblivious Sanji! And the way Luffy and Zoro are just having a conversation while Sanji's completely getting ravished... and Usopp and Nami? GUH
Excuse me while I try and pick up my brain, my limbs aren't really in working order yet
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Date: 19/06/2007 21:46 (UTC)no subject
Date: 19/06/2007 08:00 (UTC)i feel like you're out to get me. it's rather frightening, really. my mind was obliterated the moment i read 'luffy/zoro/sanji'. it's all fun and games until someone loses an eye, they say. my proverbial eye is missing. =_o
just, god, the idea that they have a tradition that involves deflowering every new nakama that comes aboard their ship XDDD. it's so truly priceless, definitely irrational, and all one piece. if i said i didn't laugh a lot, i would be lying most heavily. that jaded banter between usopp and nami was brilliant as well XD. they so would. and zoro was so in character with his stubborn sanji-hating attitude.
don't even get me started on the sex =_=. manwich... just. manwich. the word itself is enough to make me look around wildly. but you writing that manwich? it's a question of running away or diving in, because i'm never sure that i'll come out with my sanity intact (i'm still staggering mentally from this one ._.). and i noted, duly noted, that you brought out that sex kitten luffy attitude. can never ever ever get enough of it, as you write it so deliciously <3. the feeling and sensuality you conveyed in those few paragraphs was far more than i've seen many do with ten times the amount of space.
just, yeah. you kill me. also, forgive me my fangirling all over your feet =_=;;. (you're probably surprised you didn't hear 'mellorine' in there somewhere >_>;;).
...♥
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Date: 19/06/2007 21:49 (UTC)You are way too kind to me, and I'm all buzzy and giggly after reading your lovely comments, especially the 'mellorine' part which had me bursting out laughing despite being in the office at the time, and I just wanted to say - oh shit, are those sirens?! Argh, police! *runs away*
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Date: 19/06/2007 09:35 (UTC)And I love you and this pairing ... and you and luffy/zoro/sanji... and YUM!
See. you made me redundant. Gr.
lol. Sex fiend Luffy. Seriously, if the boy has even half the intensity he does during sex as with his fights... his partners would probably die very very happy.
(Note: 1 thing running through my mind after reading this... Poor poor Chopper ~~~~)
=p
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Date: 19/06/2007 21:50 (UTC)no subject
Date: 19/06/2007 18:25 (UTC)no subject
Date: 19/06/2007 21:50 (UTC)no subject
Date: 20/06/2007 02:47 (UTC)*_*
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Date: 21/06/2007 21:35 (UTC)no subject
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Date: 22/06/2007 05:02 (UTC)no subject
Date: 23/06/2007 20:40 (UTC)Seriously though, this made my day. I was able to read it before I left the house.
Perhaps this fic sort of explains how we end up getting to this (http://salmon-pink.livejournal.com/20367.html), hmm?
And yes, the first thing that pops into my mind is "Omg, Chopper?" But you have a point about Carue *shudders*.
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Date: 24/06/2007 07:37 (UTC)“Good!” Luffy shouted back, legs stretching enough to give him the extra few inches to tower over his First Mate.
Sanji wasn’t sure what was happening, but his instincts were being quite loud in insisting that he’d be safer overboard. “Uh, this isn’t about the last spring roll anymore, is it?” he asked quietly.
Two sets of eyes turned to him, glowing with demonic intensity.
*giggling madly*
On the Going Merry’s deck, Nami and Usopp glanced up from their game of cards as an unholy sounding scream erupted from the galley.
“Can’t be helped,” Nami shrugged.
“It’s tradition,” Usopp agreed.
An almighty crash ripped through the air, followed by the sound of breaking china. Lots of breaking china.
“Go fish,” Nami said.
BWA HA HA HA HA AWESOME!!!
*fanning self* This is great. Usopp has a really great idea there. And Sanji is a lucky, LUCKY bastard. That is one beautiful sandwich. *_*
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Date: 24/06/2007 14:15 (UTC)*_________* If this is tradition..♥♥♥♥♥
I love how you make Zoro and Luffy continue their convo even when they're in the midst of doing things to Sanji XDDD Sanji doesn't even know what hit him =DDD
I..I love you. A Lot. More than all the atoms that make up this world.
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Date: 14/04/2008 04:30 (UTC)no subject
Date: 07/05/2008 22:27 (UTC)HOTNESS ♥
i think what i love the most about this is that i can totally see it happening in my head xD
zolusan smexxin' it up while usopp and nami are just chillin' outside.
oh god, to be in a manwich like that.
“Make him do that again,” Zoro hissed.
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Date: 21/07/2008 01:32 (UTC)But hot damn...you are amazing...ha...tradition. Oh god, this is making me think so many naughty thoughts.
CURSE YOU AQUASCUM...I mean umm...sorry. *hangs head in shame*
X3
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Date: 27/09/2008 15:31 (UTC)I LOVE THE SPRING ROLL LINE....AND HOW PERFECTLY ZORO/LUFFY TAG TEAM SANJI INTO WAILING SUBMISSION!!
THE BEST PART IS HOW IC EVERYONE WAS...AND THE HOTNESS OF COURSE!
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Date: 03/03/2010 05:53 (UTC)no subject
Date: 20/12/2010 16:37 (UTC)I can swear I have never EVER came across an author who wrote a better, funnier, sexier, and more mind and body stimulating threesome. This is just...guh. My mind is a mess right now, and I should already be used to it with so many times I re-read it and almost laughed my guts out, xD.
Whenever I was feeling down I re-read it and my spirits lifted up!! And it never failed me yet!! And I also can't believe how in so little words you made it so fucking spectacular that I was a barely recognizable pile of goo on the floor after being subjected under the sheer awesomeness of this fic...<3
I'm not much of a talker but damn you make me want to shout praise non=stop over your skills and talent..::melts:: If I had to say what line made the best impact on me that would be: "He could feel the two of them exchange a pointed look over his shoulder as he wailed." ......... Purrr. My mind went blank every single time I reached this line and the one where Zoro hissed too, XD *shivers uncontrollably lost in awe*
And after reading so many bad characterizations of Luffy in the PIT I was seriously turned off to fiction and contemplated leaving it for good, but.... finding your fics was like Catharsis for me, lol!~ Your characterization of Luffy and others is simply... flawless. I think I fell in love with your works ten times more, because your insight not only in Zoro and Sanji but into all Strawhats is top notch and you can freely switch between then in a way that's making me speechless. I so adore your sex-fiend Luffy and how he actually is a captain of his crew - strong, demanding, dominating, intimidating, but in a so very endearing Luffy-like way.
Guh, I'm such a hopeless addict and lover of your style, I'm surprised myself over how much of an impact your smutty lines made on me, XDD. I feel so calm and peaceful knowing you still love it and will write more, <3
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Date: 20/12/2010 17:39 (UTC)Ah, The Pit. I don't think I've set foot there in years, now. But I think it's where everyone starts when they first discover fanfiction, whether it be as a reader or a writer. It is always, always appreciated to hear if I managed to capture a character's voice, especially when that voice belongs to Luffy - he may be the main character and the heart of the series, but he can be an elusive personality to pin down and write for. Especially when written sexually. So thankyouthankyouthankyou for your lovely words about this fic, seriously, I cannot thank you enough. ♥♥♥
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Date: 21/12/2010 15:09 (UTC)"I'm squirming hardcore right now in embarrassed glee" Ahaha! I wish I could see that, this line gave me very vivid images flashing through my mind, lol.
Hey, don't thank me, you're making ME embarrassed, *wiggles Chopper-like* XD This is all your work and brilliant creativity of your mind, I don't even think what I say is sufficient enough but hell I try, XD.
Hmm, really? Well there's one place I would recommend you to check out: my friend made a forum there for One Piece Yaoi Authors/Lovers and it's an interesting place with big names showing up, XD
http://forum.fanfiction.net/forum/The_Yaoi_Supernova_Authors_Guild/77062/
Christmas-time made it become quite dead to put it bluntly, but it's only because everyone's busy. Just if you feel bored and want to talk, share ideas, ask for help play OP games, or even dare someone to write a fic/pairing then it's the best place to be found, :D If you drop by and say few words in 'Meet and Greet' section or any other for that matter I'll roll out the red carpet for you and greet you officially(I'm one of moderators there). But enough advertising, xD.
Awww, my cheeks aren't red from being thanked so profoundly! They aren't, baka! *denial Franky-like* xD. I saw you posted a fic......guuuh.... such a temptation, distraction from RL and amazing treat showed before my eyes.... well, I don't know why I'm still waiting and not going to read it, lol
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Date: 21/12/2010 20:58 (UTC)Oh God, your icon, I can't, so cute, nnghAaah, I love this fandom so much - we can react to compliments by screaming "that doesn't make me happy, asshole!" and everyone implicitly understands that equals happiness, not insult. XD
Oooh, that forum sounds interesting, I'll have to check it out after Christmas when my head's on a bit straighter. I think everyone is kind of frazzled right now, aren't they? Here in England we've had crazy snow on top of all the usual holiday hassle. I've already had to warn a few people they may have to wait until after Christmas to get their gifts. Whoops...
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Date: 24/12/2010 09:55 (UTC)It's not cute, asshole!*XDYeah, this winter fucked with those stuck on the airports royally. My cousin was supposed to visit me already but instead is still in London, she said she'll come on Sunday though, but still it's Christmas without her *sad*
I warned them too, lol In no way my cards were going to make it to US or Canada on time, xD. But hey in my opinion they will still be ecstatic get it after Christmas where you don't usually expect any presents and here you have a surprise, xD.
Yeah! It's a very fun forum(damn interesting in fact, xD), I'm sure you'll enjoy yourself there, XD Heh, I'll be waiting then!