Date: 08/03/2006 23:50 (UTC)
Ah, okay. I'd chosen "seize" as a description of her physical reaction, most specifically regarding a, ahem, certain part of her anatomy, and "soar" as a description of her orgasmic state, as a variation of "fly" or "float". I'm sorry if it was confusing, I do like to play with words. "Seized" is actually quite a nice image, makes me imagine Vivi clinging to her, but in this case I was trying to find a more artful way of saying "and then she came." I hope that makes sense, and, again, sorry for confusion, I hope it didn't spoil that part of the fic for you.
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