Date: 18/11/2008 22:12 (UTC)
I adore how you made everyone's link together. Like Sanji wishing no one will find him instantly followed by Chopper wishing someone would. And Usopp and Nami's bit. It made it flow so well that it was a pleasure to read!

Like everyone else, I think you had all the characters perfect. I laughed so hard at Sanji's rape and Zoro's 'battle', too. I liked how Robin just didn't seem to care, and actually had petting afterwards. Another thing I liked was how you had it go from beginning to end; Usopp got finding the tentacles and being molested before anything and Robin got afterwards. Everyone else slowly worked the way through from the start point, which was pretty awesome.

This is so going in memories.
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