Wheee, glad you liked, Nami and Vivi always manage to make everything scorching hot, which makes things a lot easier for me when writing them.
Just a quick question - I double-checked the sentence you highlighted, because I'm always looking to improve my work, but I couldn't find any incorrect spellings. It could be that I use a British dictionary, and I know some words are spelled differently in American dictionaries, so I don't know if that's the case. Was your concern to do with spelling, or did you find a certain word or words did not fit within the context of the sentence?
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Just a quick question - I double-checked the sentence you highlighted, because I'm always looking to improve my work, but I couldn't find any incorrect spellings. It could be that I use a British dictionary, and I know some words are spelled differently in American dictionaries, so I don't know if that's the case. Was your concern to do with spelling, or did you find a certain word or words did not fit within the context of the sentence?