Oh, I loved this. It was funny and sweet and so them. You really wrote their body-language well and the descriptions of what Usopp was imagining were really sexy. Luffy was so very unhelpful through the whole thing, but the end was perfect! He was just waiting for his opening, the little stinker. Throwing the shadow of Shanks and Ben in there was a hilarious twist too. I think my favorite part was your characterization of Usopp--earnest but fidgity. Poetic in his descriptions until his nerves got the best of him. I just loved it. <3

Oh and I really want to know where the island of Really Really Hot Women is, haha! XD