http://springinstep.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] springinstep.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] salmon_pink 2008-08-31 02:50 pm (UTC)

As soon as you announced you'd caught up, (blimy, I should get going myself), I just knew there's be some fic featuring Brooke soon. And so I eagerly waited. :D

Damn, what did Brook do. I was knawing the back of my hand a little wondering but, then again, I do so love it when a writer sometimes leaves the reader's mind to wonder.

I love that the music theme continued throughout practically all of this, especially with things such as Sanji’s hips were rolling up into him, steady rhythm that didn’t feel quite like his usual restless energy,

Brook's line and signiture laugh at the end didn't seem out of place either, which I imagine is something you need to be careful of.

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