I need a cigarette after that mother-lover...I'm painfully impressed that you managed to even just write Brook. I've tried, failed, and purged myself at the attempt, but you managed to capture him in smut?!
I love the context, as well. The Zo/San/Zo undertones (no matter how fanciful) are sooo prominent at that point in the story (and right now, might I add) and it's just lovely to read about the obvious angst there. Adding to that, I like how you referred to Sanji's feelings as either 'anger or jealousy', because the former is obvious, and the latter is more realistic, no matter how much more the former is expressed. Does that make any sense at all? Didn't think so.
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I need a cigarette after that mother-lover...I'm painfully impressed that you managed to even just write Brook. I've tried, failed, and purged myself at the attempt, but you managed to capture him in smut?!
I love the context, as well. The Zo/San/Zo undertones (no matter how fanciful) are sooo prominent at that point in the story (and right now, might I add) and it's just lovely to read about the obvious angst there. Adding to that, I like how you referred to Sanji's feelings as either 'anger or jealousy', because the former is obvious, and the latter is more realistic, no matter how much more the former is expressed. Does that make any sense at all? Didn't think so.
It's gorgeous, like you. I'll leave it there ¬_¬;
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