ext_125307 (
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2008-08-31 02:46 am (UTC)
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Oh and wanted to mention one tiny, little thing I noticed:
Sanji’s arms wrapped around tighter around Zoro’s neck
You've got two "arounds" floating in that sentence.
Only caught that after I re-read the fic. Enjoyed it just as much the second time, I might add. ^__^
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Sanji’s arms wrapped around tighter around Zoro’s neck
You've got two "arounds" floating in that sentence.
Only caught that after I re-read the fic. Enjoyed it just as much the second time, I might add. ^__^