ext_313039 ([identity profile] suckmyspock.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] salmon_pink 2007-10-17 02:19 pm (UTC)

That was just awesome -- a very lovely story to find after just waking up. I really like the way you write, you have a smooth flow that's descriptive, but not to the point that it's boring, if you catch my drift.

And I feel like you've captured the characters so nicely -- I've seen a lot of people do this pairing wrong, but few who do it right.

I don't really know what to say, as I rather suck at leaving feedback -- but I'm putting this in my memories. Thanks for such a great read. :]

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