ext_312763 ([identity profile] melisandre013.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] salmon_pink 2007-08-13 06:15 pm (UTC)

This is the way it should be. Zoro being all dominant.

Stylistically, this story was extremely well done. I liked how it was broken up into definite sections. Sanji's thoughts were expressed in a way that fit with how disjointed this sudden fling seemed to be.

It made me happy.

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