i had to literally look away from the screen so my brain could reboot. SEVERAL times. i'm almost afraid to finish this comment because i feel like mere words of praise would not even be enough. writing a lj comment is serious business.
that raw possessiveness, and the way you described zoro's eyes, they sounded so feral and animal like--just, augh. also, i feel as if you've snuck into a dark corner of the fandom's predominantly female population and pulled out one of their most used fantasies XDD. or maybe i'm just dragging everyone down with me >_>;;. i don't know.
anyway, people acting off basic instincts always makes for a wonderfully raunchy situation, but you really just outdid yourself. i don't know how you do it, really XD. you're like a fic factory, but with quality control. sanji fainted. if that isn't quality, someone please show me what is.
and before i stop rambling, i must say, i am an absolute freak for the noises you've got sanji making. nc-17 is not nc-17 to me without wonderful, mouth-watering noises. and you, my queen, are exceptional in this department <3.
me? mellorine all over you? pff. salmonpink-swaaan~!
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i had to literally look away from the screen so my brain could reboot. SEVERAL times. i'm almost afraid to finish this comment because i feel like mere words of praise would not even be enough. writing a lj comment is serious business.
that raw possessiveness, and the way you described zoro's eyes, they sounded so feral and animal like--just, augh. also, i feel as if you've snuck into a dark corner of the fandom's predominantly female population and pulled out one of their most used fantasies XDD. or maybe i'm just dragging everyone down with me >_>;;. i don't know.
anyway, people acting off basic instincts always makes for a wonderfully raunchy situation, but you really just outdid yourself. i don't know how you do it, really XD. you're like a fic factory, but with quality control. sanji fainted. if that isn't quality, someone please show me what is.
and before i stop rambling, i must say, i am an absolute freak for the noises you've got sanji making. nc-17 is not nc-17 to me without wonderful, mouth-watering noises. and you, my queen, are exceptional in this department <3.
me? mellorine all over you? pff.
salmonpink-swaaan~!