And thank you so much for your lovely comments. :D I don't think I could ever let Zoro completely spiral out of control, I don't think Sanji'd survive that, but it was fun pushing them so close to the edge. I actually originally ended it after the first orgasm, stepped back from it, and realised it needed to keep going, that it didn't feel right. So definitely glad everything beyond that first fumble works. :)
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