That was amazing. Best pollen season ever, obviously. *grins* I love how they struggle for control over themselves, or rather, their pollen-sexed-up selves.
Love the fact that Zoro manages to dump them into the stream after all (instead of the situation being turned into yet another nearly-but-not-quite-rape-fest), and how the tension just gets a different kind of bad afterwards, with lots of awkwardness and silence, just like what you'd expect from these two. The end is perfect, too, still with much awkwardness and heat, but with less artificial loss of control and more genuine impulse. I might fail in bringing across what I mean, since it's 3 AM and my remaining awake brain cells have just died a happy death, but I like this fic a lot. Also because it leaves a nice opening for... something. *grins more* Always a wishful fangirl. ^_~ Thanks a lot for writing and sharing!
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Love the fact that Zoro manages to dump them into the stream after all (instead of the situation being turned into yet another nearly-but-not-quite-rape-fest), and how the tension just gets a different kind of bad afterwards, with lots of awkwardness and silence, just like what you'd expect from these two. The end is perfect, too, still with much awkwardness and heat, but with less artificial loss of control and more genuine impulse. I might fail in bringing across what I mean, since it's 3 AM and my remaining awake brain cells have just died a happy death, but I like this fic a lot. Also because it leaves a nice opening for... something. *grins more* Always a wishful fangirl. ^_~ Thanks a lot for writing and sharing!