For some reason this left me on the edge of my seat, like some kind of thriller movie. Just the secrecy and urgency of Zoro and Sanji's situation, the strained quiet and I LOVE how you emphasized the noise outside of the galley (Nami's newspaper and Vivi's clothing). It was just a sharp contrast to what was going on in there. Oooh, I just love these types of situations where the seme forces the uke to remain quiet even though they're at the point of bursting open at the seams, it's just too much. Ugh, when Sanji has to bite Zoro's hand, and then that kiss. OH OH AND THAT LINE:
Lost in it, gasping and trembling, and Sanji couldn’t help the way he was tilting his head up towards Zoro’s mouth, couldn’t think of anything but how badly he needed to taste.
I don't want to go off on a gleeful tangent for fear of sounding like an intelligible blob of goo, so I'll just wiggle. *wiggle wiggle* ♥~!!
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For some reason this left me on the edge of my seat, like some kind of thriller movie. Just the secrecy and urgency of Zoro and Sanji's situation, the strained quiet and I LOVE how you emphasized the noise outside of the galley (Nami's newspaper and Vivi's clothing). It was just a sharp contrast to what was going on in there. Oooh, I just love these types of situations where the seme forces the uke to remain quiet even though they're at the point of bursting open at the seams, it's just too much. Ugh, when Sanji has to bite Zoro's hand, and then that kiss. OH OH AND THAT LINE:
Lost in it, gasping and trembling, and Sanji couldn’t help the way he was tilting his head up towards Zoro’s mouth, couldn’t think of anything but how badly he needed to taste.
I don't want to go off on a gleeful tangent for fear of sounding like an intelligible blob of goo, so I'll just wiggle. *wiggle wiggle* ♥~!!