ext_171888 ([identity profile] hanae0711.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] salmon_pink 2006-03-19 09:11 am (UTC)

Wow.. that was really good. Fresh way of using present tense for an intense, emotionally driven scene. Must say I was confused here and there, though. :P

Great job. =D

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