Oh you. ^_^ So I've been rereading for inspiration, and now I have new comments for your fic, hehe.

I love that the flow of your story is such that you've got clueless!innocent!Usopp at the start of it, with him and Luffy (and I guess Chopper) for foreplay, Nami and Sanji are the ones really getting into the sex, Zoro continuing that into climax, and Robin being all zen in the afterglow. Heee.

Also I love your details, so that I read Sanji as totally digging the guy-on-guy type sex, while Zoro clearly hasn't had his buttsex cherry popped (argh that sentence reads so ridiculous in my head but I'm lacking a better way to say it XD)

I love the fragmented sentence structure that really carries the frantic, urgent OMGsexnow/wtfbbqtentacles??!! tone across, even though the comma abuse makes my inner grammar nazi cringe. XD It works, hehe.

So now, today was my day off, so I present you with my last batch of the Going Merry crew under influence of tentacles. I'm probably going to hell for this, and it's my first foray into porny art, so yeah, very not safe for work. XDDD Voila Nami (http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w61/rhymelon/Tentacles/Tentacle-Nami.jpg), Sanji (http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w61/rhymelon/Tentacles/Tentacle-Sanji.jpg), Zoro (http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w61/rhymelon/Tentacles/Tentacle-Zoro.jpg) and Robin (http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w61/rhymelon/Tentacles/Tentacle-Robin.jpg). Not as happy with Zoro as I could be, because he looks crazed, but maybe not quite the crazed you meant...:P Hope you like ^_^