From one Sora to another, and the quality remains! This is just wonderful, it really is. Like others have already said, the manner in which Sora's lingering innocence contrasts to the way Riku's mentality is changing, maturing and becoming darker even; the way his desires are awakening through, it just makes for a fantastic read. I'm so, so impressed here, I can't really explain.

Now, personally, I don't like Kairi. Not at all. But something I really respect about this is how clear it is that, although to Riku she's becoming the antagonist to his wants, the reader can see that in reality she really isn't doing anything wrong. That is to say, you have made her into some sort of 'omg ubar-bitch!!1' or anything, you know?

Wonderful! I'm going to start watching this journal for sure.